I picked up this discussion in the thread I posted on the Back Porch, way back when (Broke Down Engine), in response to the Scottish perfesser:
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Scratch, you might remember this thread from back when I started workin' on it where we discussed various "interpretations" of the line. I never followed up to post that I eventually got ahold of the Buddy Moss versions, in one of which he pretty clearly says, "can I get down, snake like, tap it flat, and tip light 'cross your floor" so that's how I've been singin' it.
I think McTell is possibly saying, or meaning to say, "snake level" instead of "snake like" but it does seem likely that Buddy would have learned the song directly from McTell, so I'm taking his rendering as pretty strong testimony.
But hey, great research on your alternate theory there Mr. O'M. You could probably get a grad school thesis outa that.-G- Might try lookin' for some other references to masturbation in pre war blues. Maybe Buddy was too proud (given oddenda's recent testimony) to admit to a little snake pullin' in song, so he rewrote the line? Yeah, that's the ticket. What Willie was tryin' to say was: "Guess I'll get down, snake pullin' til its flat, then drip mine on the floor."
HEEEHAAAWWW! (pre-emptive)
Sorry, couldn't resist once the notion struck me. Seriously, you really think so? I assume you were joking in your usual pranksterish way. 'Boy who cried wolf' and all that.
To me he's talking about sneaking into her room, in one way or another. That's certainly how Buddy reads it.
All for now. John C.
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“Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean they aren't after you.” Joseph Heller, Catch-22
I thought that the clues might be leading up to an act of seminal floor coating Mr. Waxwing, but rejected that as being unlikely not to mention disgusting. No, I was thinkin' more along the lines of him tempting her with the prospect of installing two ply carpet. Maybe. I mean the gift offering thing for sexual favors is all over the Blues so why not two ply carpet? But It somehow doesn't seem an entirely convincing interpretation either. I'll have to ruminate on the Buddy Moss transcription, and also hear it for myself. Its not quite adding up for me yet.
I've wanted to have someone in Georgia go find and elderly African American fellow who may have been conversant in the local idioms of the period (or shortly there after) and have him listen to the line and try to decipher it. Any Georgians out there up for this slightly weird assignment?
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My loathings are simple: stupidity, oppression, crime, cruelty, soft music. Vladimir Nabokov (1899 - 1977)
OR..... what if he's actually addressing this line to his competition, namely Blind Lemon Jefferson and in particular his Black Snake Moan? What are the release dates of the two songs? Could Broke Down Engine be a response?
"Can I get down snake lemon and tappin plantin' two ply on your floor"
Can I thwart Blind Lemon's black snake's progress across the floor which would be accomplished with a 'tappin'" cane by muffling the noise with two ply carpet?
Its out there I'll admit but things do have to make a certain kind of sense....maybe.
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My loathings are simple: stupidity, oppression, crime, cruelty, soft music. Vladimir Nabokov (1899 - 1977)
Here you go. Both takes of Buddy's Broke Down Engine No.2.
In the first take, the "...tap it flat and tip light 'cross your floor" seems pretty clear to me. The first part of the line sounds something like "Can I get down 'n' snake like 'n'...
In the second take he seems much less clear, in spite of the fact that his vocal is better recorded here. It's possibly something like "Can I get down at snake level and tap it flit flat tip light 'cross your floor." Sounds like he's almost cracking as he over emphasizes the "tip" after correcting himself on the "tap it flit/flat".
Anyway, clearly open to interpretation, so make of it what you will, sir.
Personally, rather than saying something to our idea of his competition, Lemon and Blake, I think there may more likely be something going on between McTell and his real competition, the other Atlanta players, who were, of course, also his friends. If anything, I think they may be having a joke among themselves about stumbling over a somewhat poorly constructed line. "You're singin' what?" "Oh yeah, I'm gonna sing that!" Who knows? Maybe?
The line comes around 2:25 in both takes. In the recording of Broke Down Engine he sings the first four verses of McTell's first version.
All for now. John C.
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Thanks for those cuts Mr. Waxwing. Great on their own terms. The soup thickens! On first listening I'm fairly certain that I'm hearing more syllabic events in Moss's version of the line than in McTell's. Also it makes you realize once again what a brilliant singer McTell really was. Yeah it did occur to me that the line might be deliberate semi gibberish of a sort, or even just unintentionally fluffed but plowed through so as not to ruin an otherwise great take. I'll apply my arsenal of headphones to the deciphering task later today, and see what that yields.
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My loathings are simple: stupidity, oppression, crime, cruelty, soft music. Vladimir Nabokov (1899 - 1977)
Can anyone help me decipher the lyrics of Blind Willie McTells A to Z Blues? I think I've managed to work out most of it, but there are a few parts (shown underlined with question marks), where I have no idea what he's saying.
Thanks for any help.
A to Z Blues.
Look-a here mama. Can?t get along. Honey I really tried to treat you right. Now when I come in from work. Give ya my check. You wants to raise sand, fuss an fight. Get a chance to stay out all night. You left last night at eight. Going to a show. An? come smoothing in this morning at four. You even had the nerve honey. Bring another man. Let him drive you up to my front door. Say you?re through. Ya got all my money too. Come here woman let me tell ya what I?m gonna do to you. I?m gonna cut your head four different ways. That?s Long, short, deep and wide. When I get ( rhythm) of this rusty black handle razor you?re gonna be booked out for an ambulance ride. ?cause I?m gonna cut A, B, C, D on top of your head That?s gonna be treating you nice like mama you ain?t gonna be dead. Cut E, F, G right across your face. H, I, J, K that?s where runnin? bound to take place. Cut L, M, N cross both your arms. You?ll (Sell ? an? pedal/peddle) gal your whole life long. Cut N, O, P, Q that?s gonna be trouble too. ?cause I?m gonna grab you mama and turn you every way but loose Cut R, S, T to hear you cry That?ll be the last time tears a run from over your eyes. Cut U, V, W on the bottom of your feet. That?ll be the last time you walk up an? down 25th street. ? marking cross your bosom with X, Y, Z. When I get through with this alphabet you?ll quit your messing with me. Play that thing. yeah, I?m gonna trim her down. Trim her down to my size. ?? (check it an? see). That?s the last of the A and Z. ?? (Tell her boy).
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I can't imagine where you would perform this song...
Well originally it was performed on the vaudeville stage by artists like Butterbeans & Susie (refer their 1926 rendition).
I've yet to compare but I think what Mal has quoted is the 1949 Savoy rendition which was unreleased until it appeared on a 1960s compilation entitled "Livin' With The Blues". This is from the top of my head so may be way off base...
Hopefully somebody will get to this before my return.
When I get ( rhythm) of this rusty black handle razor
On the Regal/Savoy session version (available as Pig 'n' Whistle Red on Biograph), I hear:
When I get THROUGH spreadin' rhythm with this rusty black handle razor
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You?ll (Sell ? an? pedal/peddle) gal your whole life long.
You'll settle for drinkin' pedal/peddle?? gal your whole life long
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? marking cross your bosom with X, Y, Z.
Gonna mark you cross the bosom with X-Y-Z
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?? (check it an? see).
That's what I hear.
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?? (Tell her boy).
Tear it up, boys.
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I can't imagine where you would perform this song...
Outside a theatre screening Sweeney Todd?
This song was done in 1924 by Butterbeans and Susie, as one of those squabblin' married couple songs, though the A to Z part is all sung by Butterbeans. In that context, it is perhaps less scary, since these were meant to be comic routines -- though it's still pretty scary!
edited to add: BTW, Mal, welcome to Weeniecampbell!
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