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Title: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on May 01, 2004, 01:56:09 PM
Thought I'd transfer this over from the old Yahoo site in case we lose all our hard work in some server upgrade. Feel free to start arguing all over again? :P

https://youtu.be/oAKfy2W70Qg

Dixon & Godrich entry for session is:

Geeshie Wiley, v; acc. prob. own g.
Grafton, Wis. c.March 1930

L-257-4 Last Kind Words Blues? Paramount 12951
L-261-1 Skinny Leg Blues?Paramount 12951
Matrices L-258 to L-260 inclusive are untraced.

Work in progress, phrases in doubt are *asterisked*.
Possible alternatives at end.

The last kind words I heared my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say
?
If I die, if I die in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother'n law
?
If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
I cry just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole
 
When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour I'll bring you *bolted meal*
 
I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun
Cried, some train don't come, Lord, be some walkin' done
?
My mama told me, just before she died
Lord, *sister*, daughter, don't you be so wild
?
The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my *face* from the other side
?
What you do to me baby it never gets outta me
*I may not see you after* cross' the deep blue sea

Alternative theories:
 
bolted meal: broken dreams; Bolton meal, beaujolais? :)
sister: sit there
face: babe
I may not see you after: Ah, mean iron steamer have to
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: PattonsDaimon on May 02, 2004, 01:38:41 AM
Hi Rivers.  Nice transcription.  A while back I did this for another thread.  Let's see what we think....

http://www.guitarseminars.com/ubb/Forum1/HTML/001898.html
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on May 02, 2004, 11:58:48 AM
Hi PD, and a big welcome to the list. [edite: oh wait, you've been here for a while. Welcome anyway!]

It was a collaborative effort, several of us were listening to it for a couple of weeks? :o The three transcriptions are pretty close. The phrases in question remain:

"I'll bring you (bolted meal?)"
"Lord (sister, daughter?)"
"Looked up at the sun (or sign)"

And that last line is very intriguing, I still like the "mean iron steamer" for poetic imagery but was outvoted.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on May 04, 2004, 06:38:01 PM
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And that last line is very intriguing, I still like the "mean iron steamer" for poetic imagery but was outvoted.

You were extremely lucky you were not placed in a straight jacket and carted away.

What could be more poetic than looking across the mississippi and seeing your own face? ... ooooh! gives me goose bumps.

 :P

Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: mr mando on May 05, 2004, 01:47:41 AM
I hear "If I don't bring you flowers I'll bring you beaujolais". I like the guitar arrangement so much!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on May 05, 2004, 04:07:12 AM
I just spent some time digging through the old Yahoo archives (man...? the search utility is useless!) and came up with Dirty Red's post that initially introduced the flour/bolted meal line and put it into context.? A damn fine post:

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I've missed out on any wrangling you all have done with this in the past, so I'm sorry if I'm going over old ground, but if I may.....

The wife and I (this is her main music too) had a listen at this after we got home from work today. We agreed that the very last word more-or-less rhymes with "field" - "meal" being in keeping with the flour imagery. She then said "something like bolton?" and I got very excited because Bolton is a town associated with Ms. blues, being the home of the Chatmon family. A check of the map put it at or just outside the southeast corner of the Delta, between Vicksburg and Jackson. It was entirely feasible that a local mill or mills produced "Bolton meal." But I decided to check the word "bolted" which I'd never heard in this context, and it's real - bolted meal has from its coarse state been passed through a bolt, or kind of sifter. In that context the sentiment is one of love - she's promising her lover that from across the rich man's field - and presumably from his kitchen pantry - she'll bring him the best she can manage to get.

That's kinda poetic too. Anyway, like I said, sorry if I'm late to the game here.

John aka Dirty Red
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on May 05, 2004, 06:26:12 AM
I hear "If I don't bring you flowers I'll bring you beaujolais".

LOL. Brilliant.

And welcome to weeniecampbell.com, Mr. Mando.

Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: mr mando on May 06, 2004, 04:38:08 AM
Thanks for the welcome, uncle bud. I was eventually directed over to here from the IGS forum (http://www.guitarseminars.com/cgi-bin/forumdisplay.cgi?action=topics&forum=The+Guitar+Forum&number=1) and was lurking for quite some time already.
I think the use of "beaujolais" fits the German War (first world war, with lots of americans fighting the germans in france) quite well. But what do I know?
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on May 06, 2004, 06:56:50 AM
Well, what do I  know.  ;D  The war angle re. wine hadn't occurred to me. I don't know that there's much chance a country blues singer would be using regional wine appellations but now I'll have to go back and listen.

cheers,
uncle bud
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 26, 2004, 02:17:50 PM
When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour I'll bring you *bolted meal*

I'm really convinced that Geeshie's singing "bolted meal" here - for comparison, consider this line to a similar line in Luke Jordan's Cocaine Blues:

I got a girl, she works in the white folks yard
She brings me meal, God knows she brings me lard
She brings me meal, honey she brings me lard
Brings me everything, baby, that a girl can steal

Interesting how Geeshie's scene is told from the opposite perspective and builds on the sentiment, demonstrating how much she cares about her lover.? LJ's sentiment seems to me to be basically a boast, but GW is all about the lengths she'll go to to get the best she can for her lover.? Kind of makes a nod to the sentiment in LJ's verse, but also turns it on its head...
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Montgomery on July 26, 2004, 03:14:30 PM
I've always heard it as

Lord, precious daughter, don't you be so wild

Okay, now who can play this song?  Seems to be in standard, E, with an Am chord thrown in there, and I think the b string is a little flat.  But I cannot come even close to getting the sound that Ms. Wiley gets.  Has anyone had better luck than I have?  I've heard theories about alternate tunings, but I'm not convinced.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Cambio on July 26, 2004, 05:28:31 PM
I'd like to put in a vote for beaujelais.  I'm not buying the bolted meal theory, although there is a precedence for it.  For the first part of the song, she is singing from the perspective of her lover.  It's her lover who is going off to fight in the "German War", it's her lover who wants the buzzards to eat him whole.  He's going away and he will hopefully  be returning.  To me, it doesn't make much sense for Geeshie to tell her lover to look for her "across that rich man's field", that doesn't fit with the first part of the song.  She's not coming back to him.   If the guy was coming back alive from a war in Europe, I don't think that he would bring her a bag of "bolted meal", that's just not romantic!  A barrel of bolted meal wouldn't be romantic.  If he survived the war, which he is terrified about, it would be cause for celebration.  Champagne doesn't rhyme with bolted meal, but Beaujelais sort of does.  According to the wife, who knows these sorts of things, beaujelais is a fairly common wine, like burgundy.  It makes sense to me that he would bring her a souveneir from his travels. 
I could be wrong, I have certainly been wrong before.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 26, 2004, 10:07:49 PM
Lord, precious daughter, don't you be so wild

That sounds to me like a real possibility.

Okay, now who can play this song?  Seems to be in standard, E, with an Am chord thrown in there, and I think the b string is a little flat.  But I cannot come even close to getting the sound that Ms. Wiley gets.  Has anyone had better luck than I have?  I've heard theories about alternate tunings, but I'm not convinced.

Sounds to me like the key of E, std tuning, tuned down a bit.  The V chord (B7) is really more like a Bm7 since it omits the 1st fret of the D string and instead playes the D string open.  The IV chord is more obviously minor - A minor.

I've never heard anyone really sound quite the way GW does.  In a way, I can't even imagine it happening - it sounds like she was in a real state of grace at the moment it was recorded - maybe she never sounded quite that way again...

Let's face it - even if you could nail the guitar, then you'd be faced with the singing...  a whole 'nuther nut for cracking...
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 26, 2004, 10:20:01 PM
I'd like to put in a vote for beaujelais.

The problem I have with beaujolais is that it doesn't sound at all like what she sings...  whatever she sings, it clearly incudes a long 'e' sound in the final syllable.

I also think that from this verse to the end of the song, GW is singing from her own perspective, whereas up to this point she's been describing the things her lover told her before leaving.  GW is using the flour/bolted meal to tell her lover how important he is to her, which in my humble opinion, a clever way of using a rather prosaic collection of objects in a very poetic (dare I say romantic?) way...  varying mileage and all that...
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Cambio on July 27, 2004, 07:00:10 AM
"You say tomato, I say tomato". 
I think she's saying a southern version of beaujalais, sort of like beaujalee.  Anyway, I'll argue my case next week at Clifftop. 

I worked out a version of the song in open D, although I know that's not the way she plays it, it was more suited to my singing voice.  The basic root of my version is the D minor you get from fretting the 2nd and 3rd strings at the first fret.  I alternate the bass and play the melody on the first four strings.  I put it together after I first heard the song, but before I had the recording.  I always liked the way that it worked out so I kept it in my repetoire.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 27, 2004, 04:02:46 PM
"You say tomato, I say tomato".?

Or, in this case, "you say tuh-may-ter, I say tuh-may-tuh".

Anyway, I'll argue my case next week at Clifftop.?

Tunes, beer, argument - repeat as necessary.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: waxwing on July 27, 2004, 05:53:34 PM
Interestingly, a thread about this was revived over a IGS today (And I think our Montgomery Cleft was a secondary respondent).  Anyway, someone suggested "I'll bring you buzzard meat". I actually haven't listened to the song lately, but this, or some slight variation, like "I'll be some buzzard meat", does fill some of the various parameters you guys have created (long E sound in last sylable, spoken by the soldier, etc.). Just thought I'd put it out there for you guys to argue about at Clifftop. I'm sure we'll have other things to argue about at PT.
All for now.
John C.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 27, 2004, 08:43:03 PM
buzzard meat

Is that from the Monty Python version?
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: waxwing on July 27, 2004, 09:33:49 PM
Okay, okay, I'll listen to it before I comment further, I just thought it was interesting that he (the soldier) would be referring back to his desire to have his body eaten by buzzards. As in either I'll come back alive and give you flowers or I'll come back dead and be buzzard meat. Now you guys fight it out, I'm too busy packing half my kitchen and, well, probably all but one of my guitars into my 1971 VW squareback. Hope there's room for a change of clothes or two.
All for now.
John C.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: waxwing on July 28, 2004, 12:48:10 AM
Okay, I just requested it on the Juke. It's "bolted meal" plain as day to my ears (on a Mac with good speakers). And now to bed, big day of packin' tomorrow.
All for now.
John C.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: mr mando on July 28, 2004, 04:45:02 AM
Waxwing, listen to it again when you wake up and your ears are well rested: It's beaujolais (pronounced bosholee).
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on July 28, 2004, 07:14:47 AM
Can anyone provide an example of Beaujolais appearing in a lyric or text associated with southern blacks (or whites) of this era? Or the use of any French regional wine appellations appearing in any lyric in blues or hillbilly music? Or war records, interviews whatever? I'd settle for a Bordeaux, doesn't have to be premier cru. Any example might convince me to take a second listen. While Beaujolais is certainly a commonly known appellation these days, my guess is that is largely the result of the marketing genius of the Beaujolais Nouveau phenomenon, which began only in the 1950s. Maybe regular Beaujolais was indeed a popular wine term in the 20s/30s.

I can only think of the use of the word wine, plus some (homemade) fruit wine references (cherry etc.).  Is "bosholee" something that appears elsewhere?

Call me skeptical but willing to be shown the light!  :D
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Cambio on July 28, 2004, 07:54:30 AM
Point taken.  But... can you cite another reference to buzzards in blues or old time?  Other than Joe Bussard?  Although there are references to meal, can you cite another reference to "bolted meal"?
I think it's pretty humorous that people hear as many different things as they hear.  Who know's who's right or who's wrong.  If people didn't make mistakes or get things wrong, music would be pretty boring.  So much of old blues and hillbilly music is people trying to cop licks or lyrics and getting them wrong.  That's progress man!  That's how you develop style!  Think of all the Lemon imitators out there.  Eventually you get Ramblin' Thomas.   Listen to the Carter Family sing Wildwood Flower, they butcher the lyrics but the song is a classic, the anthem of the state of Tennessee.  That's the moral of the story for me.
Now don't take this the wrong way.  I'm not saying I'm wrong.  I still hear beaujalee.  Bolted meal sounds too harsh.  I don't hear the hard T sound.  I'm sticking to the perspective argument.  She's waiting for him to come back, not the other way around.  In the next verse, she's the one waiting at the train station, not him.  And while a dude like Luke Jordan might think that a bag of meal is a swell gift, no lady in her right mind is going to go for it.  Maybe you guys should try it when you come back from PT.  "Here baby, I bought you a bag of grits.  They're the good kind, fine sifted!"  See what she says.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on July 28, 2004, 08:01:17 AM
Hi Andrew,
Your post addressed what I've been thinking all along on this Beaujolais question.  It's hard to think of "Geeshie Wiley--great singer, guitarist, and oenophile".  I just don't see it or hear it.  And to accept mispronunciation as a basis for transcribing lyrics is a pretty slippery slope.
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on July 28, 2004, 08:43:53 AM
Point taken.  But... can you cite another reference to buzzards in blues or old time?  Other than Joe Bussard? 

There's the buzzard lope, the dance referred to in some lyrics which don't spring to mind right now, as the eagle rock was. "The Buzzard Lope was similar to the more modern Eagle Rock Dance. The Buzzard Lope used outstretched arms like a bird and consisted of a Shuffle step and a little Hop. The dance is said to be similar to the West African Buzzard Dance. It's original form is representing a Buzzard getting ready to eat a dead cow."

There would at least be familiarity with the term buzzard, if not direct experience of them. I'm not convinced anyone from that era and background would have ever heard the word Beaujolais.

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And while a dude like Luke Jordan might think that a bag of meal is a swell gift, no lady in her right mind is going to go for it.  Maybe you guys should try it when you come back from PT.  "Here baby, I bought you a bag of grits.  They're the good kind, fine sifted!"  See what she says.

LOL!  :D  Yes, I want someone to try this and report back, if they survive.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Cambio on July 28, 2004, 09:20:58 AM
I've been out in the shop listening to the song and after about the seventh listen I heard bolted meal.  The key is whether you hear flour or flowers.   To me you have to take in the context of the song.  He's going to the German War, in Europe.  There are two possibilities, he's going to come back alive or dead.  If he comes back dead he wants the buzzards to eat him up, if he lives, he's going to bring her a bag of flour, flowers, fine sifted grits or wine (debateable) .  She goes to the depot, he doesn't come back, she goes home alone....
Wait.... I think I just heard something else.... did she just say... No it couldn't be.. "If I die, if I die, at the Corner Store"?  Oh, now it makes perfect sense.  Oh sorry, Nevermind.  Maybe she should have titled it "Grocery List Blues" instead.
I'll stop now.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Montgomery on July 28, 2004, 09:50:32 AM
I don't know, context is certainly important and should be taken into consideration, but there are certainly discrepancies in narrative logic in many prewar blues songs (if there's a narrative at all, which there clearly is in at least part of this song).? Where did this song come from?? I've never heard many of the verses in any other prewar blues, but some, like the "mama told me just before she died...don't you be so wild" verse, are fairly common and a version of that one appears in the Elvie Thomas/Geechie Wiley recording "Motherless Child Blues."? In fact, the second half of Last Kind Word seems to consist of more common floating verses, unlike the first half, which is more lucid in terms of narrative.? Again, this is obviously not uncommon.? I can think of dozens of prewar blues that begin to tell a story in the first few verses, which then becomes more muddled with succeeding verses.? Only this song has such original, descriptive and haunting early verses which I've never heard anywhere else.? I'd love to know more about where this song came from, or if some of those beginning verses appear in other songs.? But I don't think narrative logic is necessarily the key to figuring out indecipherable lyrics.? For my part, I think "beajoulais" is quite unlikely.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 28, 2004, 02:35:18 PM
I think part of the problem is that the lyrics to the song depict a few different speakers.? As I see it, there's no real narrative in the sense of a story to be told (not without painful amounts of interpretation, anyway), but it does describe a situation from GW's unique perspective.

Very often in blues, as you all certainly know, things are not always what they seem.? When Bo Carter sings about bananas in your fruit basket, he's not asking you to carry his groceries.? The same is the case here.? The "Kind Words" in the title do not appear to me to be kind at all:

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The last kind words I heared my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say
?
If I die, if I die in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother'n law
?
If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
I cry just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole

The first line is clearly GW's voice, maybe sung with some irony considering the cold sentiments of the next two lines that she's reporting as being said by her man.? If I didn't know any better, I'd say this guy was telling GW that their relationship was over.? If he goes, he's not coming back - he doesn't even want her to see his dead body.? He says "send it to my mother'n law", who I think is undoubtedly *not* GW's mother, but the mother of the guy's wife.? GW is a rider - his lover - but not his wife.? The MiL verse might even be intended to let GW know that he intends to return to his wife and cease the adulterous relationship with her.

Despite his indifference, she's crazy about him:

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When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour I'll bring you bolted meal

This line is clearly sung from GW's perspective.? Certainly the guy of the two preceding verses could not be responsible for such a tender sentiment...? She will clearly do anything she can to keep her man happy, including stealing the best food she can from the house of her employer.

He can't or won't return her affection, and if she can't have it, she's going to find it elsewhere.

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I went to the depot, I looked up at the sign
Cried, some train don't come, Lord, be some walkin' done

In my opinion, the depot/train is a metaphor for their relationship.

We get the feeling that in the wake of her rejection that she's become reckless and she's admonished by her mother:

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My mama told me, just before she died
Lord, precious daughter, don't you be so wild
?
GW's mother is chastising her for her low-down ways - she *is* a blues musician, after all...

The next two verses seem to me to be the emotional climax of the song.? In the next verse, she seems ready to accept some temporary separation from her man, even if it's for a long time.

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The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my babe from the other side

But her feelings for him are so strong that she can't bear the thought of a permanent end to their relationship.

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What you do to me baby it never gets outta me
I mean I'll see you, (if I) have to cross the deep blue sea

This can be read literally, of course, but I see the sea in this context as representing death:?She loves him so much that if their relationship ends, she'll kill herself.

So, in my reading, Last Kind Words is not a romantic song about a man going off to the first World War, but a song about very real adult feelings and situations, some of which are messy and complicated.? That's the blues fuh yuh...

Over & out!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on July 28, 2004, 11:24:11 PM
Poison Ivy induced insomnia gives me a little time to post this:

I think part of the problem is that the lyrics to the song depict a few different speakers.

Snip...

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If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
I cry just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole

I was listening to this tune with Kim today and she noticed something that I hadn't considered before - that the line quoted above is *not* spoken by her lover, but by GW.  It is basically her response to her man's declaration of his indifference to her, put in the same terms as he chose to use.  Of course, she's not going to war, but may get killed, I suppose, for any number of other reasons - especially if she's hurt, upset and no longer really concerned for her own safety or future...  prefiguring the "daughter don't be so wild" and ultimate verse, perhaps.

Okay - maybe I'm reading a bit much into it, but I feel that it's essential to understand that GW is using at least three narrative volices in the course of the song:  her own, her lover's and her mother's.  Unless you're going to punt and say that certain subsequent verses are unrelated at all to the inital verse, I don't see how one could maintain that the same speaker is responsible for all the verses.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on September 02, 2004, 06:02:41 AM
I can't believe nary one of you curmudgeons isn't going to call me on the carpet about this...? amazing!

Here's a breakdown of the narrative voice by verse:

V1 (The last kind words I heared my daddy say) - GW
?
V2 (If I die, if I die in the German war) - GW's lover
?
V3 (If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul) - GW

V4 (When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field) - GW

V5 (I went to the depot, I looked up at the sign) - GW

V6 (My mama told me, just before she died) - GW's mother

V7 (The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide) - GW

V8 (What you do to me baby it never gets outta me) - GW
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Cambio on September 02, 2004, 06:26:01 AM
I'm not going to argue with you Frank, despite your attempts at baiting.
I did want to add though (back to the beaujolais/ bolted meal discussion) that while listening to Memphis Minnie's "Bake my Biscuits" one of the lines is:

Ain't got no flour
Ain't got no meal
Ain't got no man
You got to rob and steal.

I should also add that, at Clifftop, Frank and Kim presented me with a very special bottle of Geeshie Wiley's Boosholee.  Just to rub a little salt in the wound (Ouch!).  I haven't drank it yet.  I'm waiting for a special occasion.  Maybe that will be running out of booze.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on September 02, 2004, 06:52:35 AM
I'm not going to argue with you Frank, despite your attempts at baiting.

Oh, drat.

I did want to add though (back to the beaujolais/ bolted meal discussion) that while listening to Memphis Minnie's "Bake my Biscuits" one of the lines is:

Ain't got no flour
Ain't got no meal
Ain't got no man
You got to rob and steal.

Good example - flour does seem to be high on the radar screen for country blues musicians.

Frank and Kim presented me with a very special bottle of Geeshie Wiley's Boosholee.? Just to rub a little salt in the wound (Ouch!).? I haven't drank it yet.? I'm waiting for a special occasion.? Maybe that will be running out of booze.

Drinking it would certainly take the edge off the sting!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on September 02, 2004, 07:49:48 AM
I can't believe nary one of you curmudgeons isn't going to call me on the carpet about this...? amazing!

Don't worry, we're all snickering behind your back. :P

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V3 (If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul) - GW

I don't buy it, why would Geechie be predicting her own death for unknown reasons?? It's the lover who is in "harms way" (to borrow a modern phrase).? You explanation is a reach.

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V4 (When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field) - GW

I don't buy it, it is the Lover that is returning home (hopefully), Geechie ain't going nowhere... she's staying home. In that day and time, women stayed home.? The context is a homecoming and you have a big celebration, you celebrate with a big meal (flour and meal) - like a Thanksgiving.? Geechie would not bring her Lover flour and meal, becausue in that day and time, women did the cooking.

Are you happy now??;D

Cheers,
slack
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on September 02, 2004, 08:21:36 AM
Don't worry, we're all snickering behind your back. :P

I figured as much...? damn weenies!

Geechie would not bring her Lover flour and meal, becausue in that day and time, women did the cooking.

Hah!? In that day and time, women did everything!

Are you happy now??;D

Of course - I'll be on vacation tomorrow!
Title: Last Kind words
Post by: Johnm on September 02, 2004, 10:09:29 AM
This is a great thread re-awakening, I think.  In this corner, we have Frankie "Spoiling for a Fight" Basile, taking on all comers.   All right, in the seventh verse, I think the narrative voice actually switches to that of Elvie Thomas--and I can prove it!
All best,
Johnm 
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on September 02, 2004, 10:36:15 AM
I'll take up the beaujolais theory if it means I get free wine...
Title: Re: Last Kind words
Post by: frankie on September 02, 2004, 11:51:44 AM
All right, in the seventh verse, I think the narrative voice actually switches to that of Elvie Thomas--and I can prove it!

A hardcore feminist interpretation?  I'm all ears!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on September 02, 2004, 12:15:37 PM
Sorry to disappoint, Frank.  I've got nothing, just thought I would join in the spirit of combative bull-shitting.  It could be, though!
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on September 02, 2004, 08:06:58 PM
Sorry all, sometimes the attempts at humor just lay there--not my finest hour.  In fact, I think in the verse referring to "coming across the rich man's field", it is Geechie's voice speaking, the implication being that because she works for the rich man, she has access to provisions like flour and bolted meal which she can bring home to prepare a great meal for her lover.  I have never heard of a Blues lyric in which a man talked about the provisions he was going to be able to bring home from his job, more often he brags about the provisions his lover brings from her job.
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on September 02, 2004, 08:14:41 PM
No need John - I know I took it as humor -- and not just because you re-enforced my position! :P

Last Kind Words has been a lot of fun over the years - the most sublime blues poetry, IMO.  And I won't even mention that for awhile I kept thinking "daddy" meant her father was going off to war!

cheers,
slack

 
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on September 02, 2004, 08:20:32 PM
I knew you were kidding, John...  although I *was* looking forward to some sort of textual analysis that would show that it was Elvie Thomas that was going off to war... <g>
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Yves on September 02, 2004, 09:31:20 PM
Beaujolais !
I have heard this song but obvisouly I can't imagine a blues singer - is it a record from 30' ? - talking about Beaujolais !
This wine began popular in France in the 60'. Before it was a very confidential local wine. No way to compare to Burgundy or Bordeaux wines known all over the world for decades.
During the "German war" - wasn't it the World war I ? soldiers use to drink awfull wine called "piquette" a 10? red wine I'm sure you will never accept to taste !
The Beaujolais area is located far away from the place where they were fighted. How to go there ? Don't forget that they had no means of transport by this time excepted the train.?
Even if they had a few days off soldiers were more interested to meet women that tasting Beaujolais !?

Beaujolais became popular in France when introducing the "Beaujolais nouveau" on the market ... late 60' ? this is an excellent marketing concept ... is it good wine ?
The taste is the same every year - rapsberry / strawberry ... bananas (taste of enzymes used)

As far as I am concerned I would go back to the song and follow a different route...
Nevertheless I will investigate if they are any historical possibility that he talks about Beaujolais wine and let you know
Hope it will be helpfull to understand the lyrics of this song... even the "Beaujolais wines"

Yves "the froggy bluesman"
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on September 03, 2004, 10:18:04 AM
Hi Yves!

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I have heard this song but obvisouly I can't imagine a blues singer - is it a record from 30' ? - talking about Beaujolais !

You are not alone.  ;D

I take it from your "froggy bluesman" sig and your knowledge of wines that you are from France?  Where are you located now?

Cheers,
slack
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on September 08, 2004, 09:57:11 PM
Frank wrote:
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When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour I'll bring you bolted meal

This line is clearly sung from GW's perspective.? Certainly the guy of the two preceding verses could not be responsible for such a tender sentiment...? She will clearly do anything she can to keep her man happy, including stealing the best food she can from the house of her employer.


I think it's the guy talking about his own ghost coming around if and when he has become buzzard food. See it's all conditional tense, 'IF I...', 'IF you...'. Fits in with the ghostly vibe of the whole thing but more telling is it also fits with Geeshie's similar moment later when she plays around with future visions of seeing her own face on the other side of the river. The song's about seeing and predicting the future and is generally crawling with ghosts and the supernatural.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Bill Roggensack on September 09, 2004, 04:59:10 PM
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The song's about seeing and predicting the future and is generally crawling with ghosts and the supernatural.

Mark - I think you've hit the nail on the head. Or the spook on it's sheet. You have accurately described the feeling I get every time I listen to this song.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on September 09, 2004, 10:19:15 PM
Eerie, isn't it? The piece is redolent of death, mysticism, the afterlife, not overtly, conjured by the imagery as a second impression. I'm wondering now if the geeshies were into that stuff. Some far off memory tells me they were but maybe not.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on September 10, 2004, 05:48:00 AM
The song's about seeing and predicting the future and is generally crawling with ghosts and the supernatural.

I think I can understand yours and FP's reaction to the tune, but I don't see it that way at all.  What I hear in it is a depth of feeling that has everything to do with rather prosaic life circumstances, but rendered with real artistry.  It's a testament to the song and GW (not to mention her ambiguous diction) that it can inspire such passionate discussion, though.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on October 17, 2004, 02:08:50 PM
Yeah, I don;t feel the supernatural, voodoo, ghosts imagery either.  The song certainly has the effect of conjuring up powerful images - the degree and variety obviously depends on the listener, which would delcare the song an artistic success.

So what makes the imagery so powerful?  Is it that the song has to do with war and death? (seems to be meny songs, not as powerful, that deal with war and death).  Content of the verses? Order of the verses? Delivery? That A minor?  We only have, what, 6 or 7 songs from Geechie and Elvie, but you know their repetoire must have been large from the level of their play.  This could be another common blues with mix and match verses, any number of whcih would work in the context.  If there were a take 2 of 'Last Kind Words' would they have song the same verses, or mixed and match - would it have had the same effect?  Two verses at least are re-cycled:

My mama told me, just before she died
Lord, sister daughter, don't you be so wild

...which is almost identical to the opening verse of 'Motherless Chile'  and...

I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun
Cried, some train don't come, Lord, be some walkin' done

... a variation on 'went to the depot, looked up at the board'.

Well, that's about all the rhetorical questions I have for today.   :)  My bet would be that Geechie sang it differently, every time.

Cheers,
slack


Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on October 17, 2004, 09:12:39 PM
You ask some good questions there, JohnD.  For me, the power of the song, as good as the lyrics are, lies in the sheer sound of it, Geeshie's sad-sounding, strong, un-flashy singing, and the powerful heavy time of the guitar part.  I think the temptation to try and make the lyrics one coherent narrative pass is strong, but in fact, I don't see them as being more than a loose agglomeration of verses taken from here and there.  Which is not to say they are any less evocative for that.  I'm a big fan of the "all over the place" blues lyric as opposed to the thematic kind which keeps reiterating the title of the song.  Sometimes that repetition of the title can seem a little pat, or like product placement in a movie.  I think the magic of the song is how good the performance is.
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on October 20, 2004, 11:13:24 AM
Probably a reflection of my drug-crazed youth. I hear multiple references to supernatural events and draw the conclusion it's a story about several generations of ghosts/deceased persons...  the father, mother, possibly lover, and in future, the daughter herself... intimations of mortality >:D

Johnm's quote (very nicely put BTW):
I think the temptation to try and make the lyrics one coherent narrative pass is strong...

Not necessarily 'narrative', I would say 'poetic context'.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: si on March 18, 2005, 06:10:06 AM
I have done guitar tab of Last Kind Words at
http://www.bedfordunplugged.co.uk/tab/lastkindwords.htm
Its in Guitarpro format but you can get a free demo of that.
It is a first attempt and obviously not right yet.
So am hoping you people will suggest improvements :-)
Please post improvements here,
or email them to me (my address is on the above website).
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: lebordo on March 19, 2005, 12:22:35 AM
Don't know if the subject of beaujolais vs. bolted meal has ever been resolved, but I'll throw the following quote from an internet article on the history of one of the Mississippi counties out:


Although the quote is talking about the Civil War period, the fact that bolted meal was used as a substitute for flour seems undeniable.? I believe there was rationing during WWI, so it would be reasonable that flour was hard to come by, and bolted meal might again be used as a substitute.

So the line:


would probably have been a normal phrase during those years.

I'll admit that beaujolais is a romantic and appealing alternative, particularly to a wine lover (Lebordo is a shortened and anglicized version of "le Bordeaux").? And Beaujolais was widely available in the US in the 50's and 60's, and probably much earlier.? However, I suspect the term would have been more likely to be used in Cajun music than in blues.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: boots on March 19, 2005, 12:55:23 AM
This is interesting.

To me as a kid I was always told not to 'bolt my meal' when I was eager to go out to play. So I would read bolted as a verb.

Boots
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: lebordo on March 22, 2005, 11:10:25 AM
Bolt, it seems, is one of those words that has a variety of meanings.  It can be a noun (as in "nuts and bolts" or "bolt of cloth" or "bolt on the door" - or a verb (as in "bolted down his food" -- meaning eat it hurriedly, or "bolted the door" -- meaning to lock the door, or "bolted out the door" -- meaning sprang suddenly and ran out the door).  Still another verb form of bolt means to sieve or sift (hence the bolter machine, which Frankie mentioned in one of the early posts to this thread), which is a mechanical sifter.

Verb forms are frequently used as adjectives (thinking back 45 years or so, to junior high english, I think they are called "verbals" when used as nouns, adjectives, etc.).  For example: the closed door (or bolted door); the open window; the boxer's battered face; etc.  Or, in this case, bolted meal.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on March 23, 2005, 10:23:58 AM
Thanks! I think that just about clinches that phrase for us.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: onewent on September 14, 2007, 11:42:04 AM
..after the discussion about the playing of Last Kind Words, and BanjoChris' demo on youtube (thanks for that) I began to get this song working for me on the guitar, so I delved into the lyrics a bit.  I've been listening intently both at real time speed and 1/16 speed, same pitch, and I feel that over the past three years and dozens of posts, we have 99% of the lyrics nailed.  I'll post them below.. but first want to comment on how I 'see' the narrative in the song. 

As a narrative whole, the song can be broken into two distinct parts:  the 'before the break' part and the 'after the break' part.  The b-t-b part (except the first verse, which sets the context for the narrative) is the woman's 'daddy' (in the blues sense) point of view, and the a-t-b part is the woman's point of view.

So the 'daddy' is married to someone else, but evidently messing w/ this woman .. if he dies, he wants his body sent to his mother-in-law because it's the 'right' thing to do, and, possibly, if the m-in-law sensed the affair, as a slap in the face.  He says 'don't bury my soul' and 'let the buzzards eat me whole' as a form of self-loathing, he knows deep down that he's evil for cheating on his wife and, possibly, spiting his m-in-law.

The last verse before the break presents the possibility that he 'may' return alive bringing a gift of bolted meal..this hopefulness sets up the next verse, where her worst fears are realized..

After the break, the woman goes to the depot in great anticipation of his return, but, 'some train don't come' ..so she's hitting the road in dispair.  This parallels the man's earlier self-loathing by letting the buzzards eat his body (soul) .. she's sentenced herself to a life of exile on the road (the blues life?)  This concept is supported two verses later when she sees her own face on the other side of the Mississippi River, indicating her destiny to wander far from home. 

I think the verse about mama's last words, to 'get over it', so to speak (I hear 'don't you weep and whine'  :-\), helps to show the depths of her sorrow and the lengths she'll go to in order to escape it .. i.e. ignore her mothers advice,   and cross the physical and psychological barrier of the Mississippi to hit the road.

The last verse brings the narrative full circle:  She's stuck on him - "never gets outa' me", and a sort of foreshadowing in 'I may not see you after cross the deep blue sea', meaning that, she knew from the beginning that once he went off, he'd never return..a classic narrative, you know from the first that the characters are doomed!

Now the lyrics, with only the ''weep and whine" part unclear to me:


The last kind words I heared my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say
 
If I die, if I die in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother-in-law
 
If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
I cry just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole
 
When you see me comin'  look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour  I'll bring you bolted meal
 
     **BREAK **

I went to the depot, I looked up at the sign (sounds like sun)
Cried, some train don't come, Lord, be some walkin' done
 
My mama told me, just before she died
Lord, precious, daughter, don't you *weep and whine*  (could be 'be so wild')
 
The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my face from the other side

What you do to me baby it never gets outta? me
I may not see you after cross the deep blue sea


And, this is really hard to sing while playing the guitar part

Regards, Tom

..but then again, if he wants his body sent to his mother-in-law as a signal to the woman that the affair is over..that changes things a bit at the beginning, but, the after-the-break part still works..

Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on September 14, 2007, 03:01:55 PM
Hi Tom,

Interesting interpretation.  And to have another interpretation just goes to show that it is a great song because it succeeds on so many levels and fires off our imaginations in many different ways!  I don't think of these kinds of interpretations as right or wrong - as in the end, we'll never really know.

My simpleton mind needs a simpler interpretation.  so I prefer to think of the song in these terms... currently at least, it often changes!  ;)

her "daddy" is her husband.

if he gets killed in the war (great foreboding here) I think the reason for the request to the MIL is that the MIL can afford or help with the burial (a gift of bolted meal shows how poor they are). (I believe the father in law was a no count and is long gone.  :P )

The after the break part is her losing her husband to war... and never being able to get over it as expressed at the mothers death bed.

What a heavy song -- i think I need a beer.   Ah!, almost happy hour.

Cheers,
slack


 
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: dingwall on September 15, 2007, 12:46:46 PM
There are several bits (in capitals) where I offer changes from one or both versions of those given (at the beginning of the topic, and yesterday), so I write my whole version.   

LAST KIND WORDS BLUES
 I
The last kind words I heared my daddy say,
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say,

"If I die, if I die in the German war,
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother-in-law".

If I get killed, if I get killed, please DON'T TELL a soul.
I cry, just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole.

When you see me comin', look 'cross the rich man's field.
If I don't bring you flour, I'll bring you boulted meal.

I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun.
Cried, some train don't come, GON' be some walkin' done.

My mama told me just before she died.
Lord, SAID, "GOOD daughter, don't you WEEP AND WHINE."

The Mississippi River, you know IS deep and wide.
I can stand right here, see my BABE'S ON the other side.

What you do to me, baby, it never gets OUT OF me.
I may not see you, HAVE TO cross the deep blue sea.
                 
As for boulted(Chambers)/bolted(Merriam-Webster) meal occurring in blues, here are some instances:
 
RED CROSS BLUES Walter Roland
Gettin' ready to give you a nickel worth of rice and a bag of that boulted meal.

WELFARE BLUES Speckled Red
Give one little can of this tripe, some o' that boulted meal.

THE RED CROSS Brownie McGhee
They'll give you a bag of tomatoes, a peck of boulted meal.

THE RED CROSS STORE Pete Harris
They give you a nickel's worth of rice and a dime of that boulted meal.

And 'buzzards'

HOW DO YOU KNOW Huddie Ledbetter
Hawk and buzzards went into town.
The hawk come back all broken down.

Old cow died in the middle of the branch.
Jaybirds whistle and the buzzards dance.

OH RED'S TWIN BROTHER Joe McCoy
Oh, Red, it won't be long.
Before the buzzards be pickin' on your bones.

All are in Document DOCD series.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Michael Kuehn on September 16, 2007, 08:35:06 AM
I took a stab at putting some of Last Kind Words into TabEdit. You can download it here and feel free to make comments/suggestions. It's based primarily on how I interpreted the version by BanjoChris. I couldn't get the slides to sound right in TabEdit, so they're not tabbed here as slides, even though they should be played that way.

http://webpages.charter.net/bluesmike/Last_Kind_Words.tef

Mike
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: suprovalco on July 11, 2008, 09:43:53 PM
I just the lyrics to Last Kind Words post. The line that you have ending "bolten meel" is actually "both a meal". As in if body doesn't make flowers grow it will make something that you can eat grow.
great site, just joined - john
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Bill Roggensack on July 17, 2008, 06:19:13 PM
It's actually "bolted meal" - which can still be purchased at [among other places] the grist mill that operates intermittently for tourists at Mabry Mill, VA. The term refers to a screening process (the bolter) used to separate finely ground corn flower from the grits and bran.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on February 04, 2009, 11:10:40 PM
Hi all,
Re bolted meal, I remember that when it was first suggested that this was what was "brought" in the lyrics to "Last Kind Words", there was skepticism in some quarters.  I was listening to Walter Roland singing "Red Cross Store" tonight, and one of his verses began:
   Say, you go up there early in the mornin', say they ask you, "Boy, how you feel?"
   Gettin' ready to give you a nickel's worth of rice and a bag of that bolted meal
Finding a reference to bolted meal in another song's lyrics seemed a good corroboration that it wasn't too arcane a term to show up in blues lyrics after all.
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on February 05, 2009, 06:13:27 AM
And don't forget, we're all still waiting for corroboration on "Bougelois"    :D
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: GhostRider on February 05, 2009, 08:46:52 AM
And don't forget, we're all still waiting for corroboration on "Bougelois"    :D

(placing stick firmly in anthill)  >:D

Alex
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Mr.OMuck on February 05, 2009, 09:23:45 AM
And don't forget, we're all still waiting for corroboration on "Bougelois"    :D

"I met a bourgeois girl about four foot four said c'mon daddy and give me some more of your Diddy Wah Diddy......."

There are countless other examples! ;)
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: lindy on February 05, 2009, 09:39:25 AM
And don't forget, we're all still waiting for corroboration on "Bougelois"    :D


Good Cajun band, up for a Grammy this year I understand.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on February 05, 2009, 09:43:44 AM
It seems we cannot have too much fun with these lyrics.  This thread is fun to read through again - loved Yves, the Frenchman's response, ha!

But I should congratulate Johnm for finding another reference to "bolted meal" - good work. 
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on February 05, 2009, 04:34:40 PM
Yes, good score, that puts it beyond dispute in my mind.
 
Glad to hear you've gotten over your Red Cross Store phobia JM
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: mr mando on February 06, 2009, 05:18:08 AM
Hi all,
Re bolted meal, I remember that when it was first suggested that this was what was "brought" in the lyrics to "Last Kind Words", there was skepticism in some quarters.  I was listening to Walter Roland singing "Red Cross Store" tonight, and one of his verses began:
   Say, you go up there early in the mornin', say they ask you, "Boy, how you feel?"
   Gettin' ready to give you a nickel's worth of rice and a bag of that bolted meal
Finding a reference to bolted meal in another song's lyrics seemed a good corroboration that it wasn't too arcane a term to show up in blues lyrics after all.
All best,
Johnm

Johnm, it seems dingwall has already given this example in reply #57:

As for boulted(Chambers)/bolted(Merriam-Webster) meal occurring in blues, here are some instances:
 
RED CROSS BLUES Walter Roland
Gettin' ready to give you a nickel worth of rice and a bag of that boulted meal.

WELFARE BLUES Speckled Red
Give one little can of this tripe, some o' that boulted meal.

THE RED CROSS Brownie McGhee
They'll give you a bag of tomatoes, a peck of boulted meal.

THE RED CROSS STORE Pete Harris
They give you a nickel's worth of rice and a dime of that boulted meal.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on February 07, 2009, 01:24:49 PM
And mr. mando, it seems like I would not have made the post or the point had I read dingwall's post any time recently, doesn't it, especially when it's so easy for everyone else to check?  Examples don't mean much to me until I hear something for myself.  I was not going to wade through the whole thread prior to posting something I had just heard and was excited about--shame on me! 
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: mr mando on February 09, 2009, 02:26:34 AM
And mr. mando, it seems like I would not have made the post or the point had I read dingwall's post any time recently, doesn't it, especially when it's so easy for everyone else to check?  Examples don't mean much to me until I hear something for myself.  I was not going to wade through the whole thread prior to posting something I had just heard and was excited about--shame on me! 
All best,
Johnm

Sorry for being the smartass. Shame on me indeed!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: bccmdl on May 22, 2009, 03:21:12 PM
Yet another transcript of this great song:


The last kind words I heared my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say
"If I die, if I die, in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother, lord"

"If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
I thought just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole"
"When you see me comin', look 'cross the rich man's field
And if I don't bring you flour, I'll bring you bolted meal"

(instrumental)

I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun
Cried, some train don't come, gonna be some walkin' done
My mama told me just before she died
Lord, sit there daughter, don't you be so wild

The Mississippi River, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my babe from the other side
What you do to me baby, it never gets out of me
"I may not see you, ’have to cross the deep blue sea"


The quotation marks refer to the lover's words (her "daddy"). The way I see it, in the first two quotes her lover is talking to god. He's scared, he thinks he will die in the war. In the third quote, he talks to her, saying he will come back from the war alive. I understand these two verses as: "do you know how I will come back? In great style (across the rich man's field), and I won't have my hands empty, I'll be ok."
After the instrumental solo, there is a depiction of her hard life, maybe now even harder without her lover. The train is not coming, she'll have to walk; she remembers her mother's last words: "don't you be so wild".
In the last part she mentions the Mississippi River, deep and wide. Like the ocean, right? And her lover is on the other side of the Atlantic. It's the perfect local metaphor for her separation. She stands on the edge of the Mississippi and "sees" (in her mind) her lover on "the other side" - of the Atlantic! She can't get over what her lover did to her - he did go to war (maybe he could have stayed if he decided to desert the army). The song ends with the memory of her lover saying that he has to go away.

Hope you liked my ideas on this song. I’d love to hear some comments…

All the best
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on May 22, 2009, 05:01:15 PM
Welcome to weenie campbell there bccmdl and thanks for keeping this thread alive, it's always a good one.

Your post made me think of another unexplored, so far as I can remember, which admittedly isn't that far, possibility.

Could the second part of v1 be a Twenties early-Thirties mother-in-law joke? That would be pretty funny, in a 'dark, Last Kind Words' way. I'm thinking Peetie Wheatstraw and the "Devil's son-in-law" tag he had for himself.

Agree that LKW just invites creation of narratives, some of them quite unexpected, see: Beaujolais. :P That's what makes it great and fabulous poetry, with some nice political angles, "rich man's field". My first take on the last line of the song had a "mean iron steamer" in it. I was, and still am, laughed at, can you believe that?  ;)

I imagine in the "rich mans field, bolted meal" verse Geeshie reporting the person still saying goodbye as he's heading off to war. He's still considering he might get killed, talking to her saying "I'll be watching over you and make sure you have something to eat, even if I get killed". So Geeshie is introducing the reported speech in the first two lines as in "this is what he said", followed the guy's last kind words, right up until the instrumental after which it flips back to Geeshie, describing more recent events at home as she waits for him.

My interpretation is pretty close to yours. The "River - deep, wide - see your face on the other side" image is used in another song or perhaps more. No specific examples spring to mind right now though. The sense of time is pretty massive in the song as you point out, with all the either actual or implied flashbacks.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: bccmdl on May 23, 2009, 04:06:38 AM
Hey, I really liked your mother-in-law-joke interpretation! It makes sense to me, considering the acid humor some songs of those days had… That way the guy talks twice about his dead body in a humorous way. I buy it!
I just thought about another possible interpretation for the “rich man’s field” and “bolted meal” verses. Maybe “when you see me comin’” could mean “when you see me going away [to war]” and “look ‘cross the rich man’s field” could simply mean “look away” – he indicates a place not related to them (they are not rich). A better place, by the way. Something like “don’t think about me going away, think of something good”, or simply: “forget me”.
Maybe the verse “and if I don't bring you flour, I'll bring you bolted meal” was at that time a common expression (this could be just a stupid guess, I admit it), meaning something like “I will give you something good, you can be sure of that”. It has already been argued in this forum that bolted meal could be a substitute to flour… Taking this line of thought even further (sorry), this “expression” could mean simply “everything will be ok, I promise”. On the song, it would be used on this last sense.

In short: forget me / everything will be ok

I’m sorry my theories are not really based on facts… it’s just that I really enjoy building theoretical puzzles out of loose pieces of information! Maybe I try too hard to see things making sense… :P
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: doctorpep on January 13, 2011, 02:39:08 PM
On the album, Negro Folklore From Texas State Prisons, Joseph "Chinaman" Johnson sings about "bolted meal" on "Three Moore Brothers", which appears to related to our friend, Tom Moore. I'm just curious if anyone else has ever come across this. It's amazing how a lot of this information related to lyrics and Blues players' lives sits right under our noses the whole time. It's creepy, actually.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Johnm on January 13, 2011, 04:12:16 PM
Hi doctorpep,
I hadn't heard of the reference that you cite to bolted meal before, but once you're introduced to such things they do seem to crop up all over the place.  It just seems to be the nature of things.  It's sort of like hearing about some obscure medical condition or illness for the first time, and then hearing it mentioned four or five times in the weeks following your first hearing of it.  Do not be alarmed.
All best,
Johnm
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frankie on January 13, 2011, 04:26:41 PM
or kinda like test-driving a new car, then for the next week, you see that new car everywhere.

happens every time.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: zpdy on April 04, 2012, 01:01:53 PM
You all should check out the essay "Unknown Bards" by John Jeremiah Sullivan. It's included in his excellent book "Pulphead." It includes a lot about Geeshie Wiley, and deals with trying to figure out the words to the "bolted meal" part.

The pdf is here:
http://www.eyland.org/files/unknown_bards.pdf (http://www.eyland.org/files/unknown_bards.pdf)

--josh
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: uncle bud on April 04, 2012, 01:12:46 PM
Welcome to WC, zpdy. I thought this essay was discussed somewhere on Weenie, and in this context, though can't find it at the moment. But worth noting that the discussion of bolted meal in this thread predates Sullivan's essay by about 4 years.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: The Gloth on April 26, 2012, 02:32:48 AM
Hello everybody, I'm new here (first post) and primarily French-speaking (I'm from the french-speaking part of Belgium and live in Brussels).

Just recently discovered that song by Geeshie Wiley, and very intrigued by the meaning of the lyrics. The image of "Don't bury my soul, let the buzzards eat me whole" strikes me by the similarity with the funeral customs of the Native Americans (at least some tribes) : they didn't bury the daed, but placed them in high places, or on some high platform, to be eaten by buzzards or vultures. Could it be that it refers to that ? Or maybe to the cultural inheritage of Gullah/Geeshie people, they could have had similar ways to dispose of the dead before (or even after) they were taken to America as slaves.

I think the second couplet must be from GW's point of view, or else it wouldn't make sense that the same person wants his body be send to his mother-in-law, and at the same time being left out and eaten by buzzards.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on April 26, 2012, 03:13:28 AM
Welcome The Gloth.  Thanks for adding your perspective (I had not thought of a possible India connection) and congratulations on reading this entire thread!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: The Gloth on April 26, 2012, 04:50:23 AM
Thanks Slack !

Searching further, I found new possible indications : first, there is in fact a strong connection between Geeshee/Gullah people and the Indians, because the "Black Seminoles" were mostly Gullah that escaped from the rice plantations of Georgia and South Carolina. Mixing with renegade indians, they settled in the jungles of Florida as a whole free community, and each group adopted some customs of the other.

They fought two wars against the U.S., and after the Civil War many Black Seminoles were employed as scouts by the U.S. army, for they had been fighting and surviving in a hostile environment for several generations. Coming from that, it would make sense that they served also in the "German war"...

Another thing : the Gullah culture, deeply rooted in Africa, has a lot to do with ancestor's ghosts, evil spirits and so forth. And their "root doctors" are sometimes called "Doctor Buzzard"...   
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on April 26, 2012, 05:35:35 PM
The Tibetans do that too, it's called a sky burial, and originated in Tibet's pre-Buddhist past with the shamanistic B?n religion.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Woodshifter on April 29, 2012, 11:00:57 AM
I think part of the problem is that the lyrics to the song depict a few different speakers.  As I see it, there's no real narrative in the sense of a story to be told (not without painful amounts of interpretation, anyway), but it does describe a situation from GW's unique perspective.

Hi. I'm new here, and I found this forum while looking for the lyrics of this song. After reading this thread, I started thinking about how often blues songs were a collection of maverick stanzas, or floating lyrics that, when looked at closely don't make much sense. For example, in Robert Johnson's "Kind Hearted Woman", from one verse to the next, he says she'll do anything in the world for him, and then that she doesn't love him. It seems blues singers didn't give much thought to continuity. There are countless examples.

Anyway, it occurred to me that something like that might be happening with "Last Kind Words". What struck me was that in the first verse, she said "the last kind word my daddy said to me", i.e. that "word" was singular. In the title, though, it's plural. If Wiley felt no need to write a set of lyrics that had the sort of continuity we like to look for, that the only unity to be found in the song would be that they're a collection of last words (hence the plural in the title) that various people have said, including the speaker herself.

Any thoughts?
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Stuart on April 29, 2012, 02:08:47 PM
Just one: I'd be careful about the perceived continuity or lack thereof between song lyrics and song titles. What appears on the record label didn't necessarily come from the hand of the singer or lyricist.

Floating lines or verses, and the lack of continuity or sense re: the lyrics have been the topics of many discussions here over the years.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Woodshifter on April 29, 2012, 03:08:14 PM
Just one: I'd be careful about the perceived continuity or lack thereof between song lyrics and song titles. What appears on the record label didn't necessarily come from the hand of the singer or lyricist.

True enough. Hadn't thought of that.

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Floating lines or verses, and the lack of continuity or sense re: the lyrics have been the topics of many discussions here over the years.

I'm sure it has, but I didn't see any reference to it in this particular discussion. In fact, I mentioned it because I saw considerable effort to interpret connections that I think might not actually be there.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on April 29, 2012, 03:54:56 PM
The 'loose agglomeration' theory actually has been discussed (but do feel free to keep developing it!), see page 4 of the thread:

I think the temptation to try and make the lyrics one coherent narrative pass is strong, but in fact, I don't see them as being more than a loose agglomeration of verses taken from here and there.  Which is not to say they are any less evocative for that.  I'm a big fan of the "all over the place" blues lyric as opposed to the thematic kind which keeps reiterating the title of the song.  Sometimes that repetition of the title can seem a little pat, or like product placement in a movie.  I think the magic of the song is how good the performance is.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Woodshifter on April 30, 2012, 05:05:16 AM
Oops. Hadn't noticed that one!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: frailer24 on July 21, 2012, 06:35:40 PM
Highly interesting theory. I had never even had this occur to me, even though I've been playing a very "true-to-record" version for the past 5 years! Just another amazing piece of insight us Weenies are known for!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on July 21, 2012, 07:25:27 PM
Poetry transcending narrative and deepening the narrative range perhaps.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: cravendish on November 03, 2012, 02:03:04 PM
Hi, I've been reading here for some time - great stuff! - and finally decided to register.

I like what has been posted concerning "Last Kind Words" - especially what you found out about "bolted meal" etc.
I still think that the line "Lord, *sister*, daughter, don't you be so wild" should read "Lord, bless?d daughter..." and that the final stanza is slightly different:
"What you do to me baby it never gets out of me,
I may not see you after I cross the deep blue sea."
The "I" in the final line makes a lot of sense to me, as this would tie it in with the beginning, that is, going across the ocean to Europe, as well as with the whole death theme (the Mississippi as the ocean as the river Jordan...).

Anyway. One aspect of the lyrics that, so far, hasn't been discussed is the line:
"When you see me comin' look 'cross the rich man's field."
Here, I'd like to suggest a different reading:
"When you see me comin' look 'cross the Richmond Field"

Over the years I've often been struck by the fact of how topical many of the old blues lyrics are. The little that is known about Geeshie Wiley suggests that she was from Natchez or the Natchez area. Now, just outside Natchez there is the old Richmond plantation, see:
http://sankofagen.pbworks.com/w/page/14230765/Richmond%20Plantation (http://sankofagen.pbworks.com/w/page/14230765/Richmond%20Plantation)

The fields of this plantation are (still) crossed by a railway line, thus someone could well be looking out for an approaching train across the Richmond Field and then, as no train comes in sight, proceed to the depot (as the next line has it) to find out if and when a train is due. The depot in question could be this one:
http://www.rrpicturearchives.net/showPicture.aspx?id=1897337 (http://www.rrpicturearchives.net/showPicture.aspx?id=1897337)

... all of which would also explain the narrator's position on the banks of the Mississippi river, thus fusing actual description and symbolical meaning of the lyrics.

What do you think?
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on November 03, 2012, 02:57:47 PM
Richmond makes good sense. I found the plantation on the old map link (http://usgwarchives.org/maps/mississippi/citymap/natchez1891.jpg), a few miles south of Natchez.

Listening back to the line, she seems to sing "rich man's" though. Doesn't mean she wasn't referring to Richmond, that could have been the local vernacular way of referring to it, with a touch of humor. So I really don't know, either way would work for me.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: bird to whistle on November 05, 2012, 03:44:46 PM
Geeshie is telling a story about her man going off to war and what she thinks and feels about it. The thing is that it's a little out of order. Here is my interpretation of the lyrics and the order they might go in if you wanted to make the story more clear.


The last kind words I heared my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heared my daddy say

This is the most important line because she is telling us what she is going to be singing about. It's also like her saying "once upon a time", or as Linghtin Hopkins says "once in the county"


"If I die if I die in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother-in-law
 
If I get killed if I get killed please don't bury my soul
I cry just leave me out let the buzzards eat me whole

What you do to me baby it never gets outta me
I may not see you after I cross the deep blue sea
 
When you see me comin' look cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour I'll bring you bolted meal"

These are all things her man told her before he left. I think in the first line he says if he dies he wants her mother in law to get the body because he doesn't want her to see him like that. The "don't bury my soul" line, to me, is the same as Robert Johnson saying "You may bury my body, down by the highway side. Baby, I don't care where you bury my body when I'm dead and gone". In the next line he's saying he loves her and may not see her again after he is shipped out across the sea, but then in the last line he says she will see him again and he'll have a bolted meal with him. This could be a way of him saying "I'll bring the groceries with me when I come back, everything will be fine, just like before", or it could be more of a joke, like saying "you'll recognize me when I come back because I'll have bolted meal with me". Joking that she wouldn't recognize his face after being away for so long. You can imagine her replying that she would never forget him after he says this.


The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my babe from the other side

This can be interpreted many ways. Maybe she is saying "river" but is referring to the ocean mentioned earlier. Maybe she is thinking about standing by the river and thinks she sees him on the other side. Maybe the river represents death and he crossed over or maybe it just means she misses him and they are separated by an insurmountable distance but she can still see his face.


I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun
Cried, some train don't come, Lord, be some walkin' done

Her man is now gone and she doesn't know what to do so she decides to leave town. The sun is high in the sky so the train is late so she starts to walk.


My mama told me, just before she died
"Lord, precious daughter don't you be so wild"

Now she is walking down the road and she hears the voice of mother telling her to reconsider leaving. It's a warning to her that she shouldn't be so impetuous and that she should reconsider leaving. She should wait for her man because he'll be coming back to her one day.


Maybe I am reading too much into it, but this is how I like to thinks of this song.

 
Also it sounds to me like she's saying "malted milk" and not "bolted meal". Bolted meal, however, makes more sense and rhymes better so that's what I'm going with.

What do you guys think?
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on November 05, 2012, 05:00:53 PM
I think it's interesting to rearrange the verses, good idea.

It's unusual to hear so much reported speech in one song but it makes sense. Ballad songs, like Stagger Lee, tend to have a lot of lines about what somebody told somebody else. Maybe it was more common in the older 'story' tunes. This one sure goes back a fair way.

Pretty sure the 'river' + 'face' verse is symbolizing the Mississippi as Jordan, the evidence of many gospel songs would support this. The 'depot' verse could be the unwitting recent widow going to meet the train bringing her man home from the war, she hadn't got a sad letter from the Department of War but suspected as much and had a plan B to hit the road.

Much as I like Ovaltine on a cold winter night, 'malted milk' would be a big stretch in this context.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: bird to whistle on November 05, 2012, 06:02:45 PM
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It's unusual to hear so much reported speech in one song but it makes sense.

I agree, I can't think of any other.

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the 'river' + 'face' verse

I still hear babe or baby and not face.

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the evidence of many gospel songs would support this

Would you mind posting an example.

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Much as I like Ovaltine on a cold winter night, 'malted milk' would be a big stretch in this context.

I though it was malted milk before I read the thread. I was thinking more
along the lines of it being a powder rather than a drink since that can be used in baking.

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The 'depot' verse could be the unwitting recent widow going to meet the train bringing her man home from the war, she hadn't got a sad letter from the Department of War but suspected as much and had a plan B to hit the road.

That works too. I guess it depends on if you like happy or sad endings.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on November 19, 2012, 08:28:06 PM
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Would you mind posting an example.

Sorry it took me a while to get back to this. Blind Willie McTell ? I Got To Cross The River Jordan, would be a good example.

It's on the juke. The River Jordan is clearly symbolic of crossing from life to whatever comes next. There are many more, in several musical genres, but primarily in gospel and, most likely inherited from gospel, old country songs. In the latter category would be I Am A Pilgrim.

Click here to see songs on the juke with Jordan in the title: http://weeniecampbell.com/yabbse/index.php?limiter=Title&search=jordan&limit=27&page=juke&jukesp=library (http://weeniecampbell.com/yabbse/index.php?limiter=Title&search=jordan&limit=27&page=juke&jukesp=library)
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: jimbeaux on April 21, 2014, 11:23:42 AM
Hi all,

I am pretty much a novice when it comes to blues music, and hopefully not repeating something below that may have been discussed elsewhere on this forum.

After reading the article below from the NY Times, a Google search led me to this forum.

I read this thread and found it most interesting, i found the user name "SLACK" quite eerie after reading the L.V. Thomas article.

Thanks for all the insight you provided here

http://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2014/04/13/magazine/blues.html?ref=magazine&_r=0 (http://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2014/04/13/magazine/blues.html?ref=magazine&_r=0)
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on April 21, 2014, 12:35:39 PM
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I read this thread and found it most interesting, i found the user name "SLACK" quite eerie after reading the L.V. Thomas article.

Welcome Jimbeaux!

I am an eerie kinda guy, but look nothing like L.V.  but just wait until you read up on "Uncle Bud'!  :P
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: zcm on April 26, 2014, 02:01:00 PM
Hi. I too found this thread after reading the wonderful NYT article. Mostly because the words "mother-in-law" don't seem right to me and I was looking for different transcriptions of the lyrics.

Having read your replies, I'd like to add another interpretation.

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The last kind words I heard my daddy say
Lord, the last kind words I heard my daddy say
These are the last words the song's protagonist hears from her lover's lips. They are gloomy and not particularly kind. But that's a clue to the unfolding of the song, because it hints that these were not the last words, but the last kind ones. Hearing farewell from a loved one is cruel and unkind, so this implies he was sent to the war and they parted ways here.

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If I die, if I die in the German war
I want you to send my body, send it to my mother, lord
Our protagonist's lover isn't asking her specifically to send his body home, but rather, he's expressing a feeling (powerlessness, hopelessness, sorrow).

Can anyone explain why this should be "mother-in-law"? I'm not sold on the idea that it means their affair is illicit. The dead soldier being sent back to the mother(land) is a much simpler, universal and powerful visual, and I think it makes more sense in the context to the song.

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If I get killed, if I get killed, please don't bury my soul
Cried, just leave me out, let the buzzards eat me whole
He further laments, please don't forget me (you can bury my body, but don't bury my soul). The metaphor of the birds of prey tearing him apart adds to the gloom of the imagery.

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When you see me comin', look 'cross the rich man's field
If I don't bring you flour, I'll bring you bolted meal
Here, we are no longer hearing her "daddy"'s words. Our protagonist decided that she will see him off before he's sent to war.
She will go to him and procure some flour or bolted corn meal, but she will bring him something. This was pretty common before modern times (http://www.foodbeast.com/2014/02/19/this-is-what-army-food-rations-look-like-around-the-world/); families would offer deployed soldiers food or other useful goods to take to the war front.

I wonder if the "rich man's field" is a biblical reference to Ruth (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Book_of_Ruth#Summary), gathering left-over grains from a rich man's field, to sustain herself and her mother-in-law, Naomi.

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I went to the depot, I looked up at the sun
Christ, some train don't come, gon' be some walkin' done
She goes to the train station, no trains are coming. She looks up, the sun is already high (mid-day), she will have to walk the distance (remember, her lover is departing, so she can't leave it for the next day).

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My mama told me, just before she died
Lord, precious daughter, don't you be so wild
As she walks what is surely a considerable distance, under the scorching sun, she remembers her deceased mother's advice, not to be "wild" (don't be impulsive, be wise).

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The Mississippi river, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right there, see my babe from the other side
She finally arrives. She stands on the river bank and sees her lover on the other side, but it's too late. He's departing.

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What you do to me baby, it never gets outta me
I may not see you after, across the deep blue sea
She can't forget the way he makes her feel, her feelings for him ("what you do to me baby, it never gets outta me"). He will be always on her mind (this line also brings me back to the story of Ruth: "where thou diest, will I die, and there will I be buried: the Lord do so to me, and more also, but death part thee and me").

Standing on the river bank of the "deep and wide" Mississippi, she can still see him, but, in a final lament, she questions if she'll still be able to see/remember him, across the vastness of the ocean.

I've seen this line transcribed "as I cross the deep blue sea", as some kind of afterlife metaphor. Which is possible (there are also many religious references to the "deep blue sea"). But I don't believe that's what's being sung. There's also a song by Lonnie Johnson that predates "Last Kind Words Blues" (1930), called "Deep Blue Sea Blues (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBgI4YT9nK8)" (1928). Not to imply any plagiarism, but folk musicians often borrow words from one another, so maybe that was an inspiration.

I don't see the supernatural element in this song at all, it's a simple song, depicting a very universal theme. Some of the best songs are just that: simple stories told in compelling ways. (And Geeshie's voice is haunting enough, anyway.)

Just my two cents. Thanks for reading, enjoyed reading all the comments here as well!
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: heather on May 20, 2017, 06:39:27 PM
New member here: Thank you so much for all this years-long analysis, this has been extremely interesting and enjoyable to read through. Now my turn: I had a realization last night that I haven't seen anyone else posit yet. For the verse:

"The Mississippi River, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my face from the other side"

(for those who think it is face, as I do, rather than babe), I had been puzzling over how someone could see their own face from the other side of the river, and suddenly felt sure the line actually refers to looking down into the depth of the river and seeing one's own reflection.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Slack on May 20, 2017, 10:03:06 PM
Welcome to weeniecampbell heather!  I like your interpretation - a new twist to an old analysis.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: btasoundsradio on May 21, 2017, 03:57:48 PM
I always thought it was "see my base from the other side", maybe that's far fetched.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: jpeters609 on May 21, 2017, 06:40:45 PM
I always thought it was "see my base from the other side", maybe that's far fetched.

I think that's the crux of it: you can hear a "b" sound at the start and an "s" sound at the end. That's why some folks hear "babe" and some hear "face" (and you hear "base"). This might be an instance where a muffed lyric on Geeshie's part has had the rest of us scratching our heads all these years later. It's possible she wanted to sing "baby's face" and then realized there just wasn't time.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: PaperTiger on September 07, 2020, 01:05:09 AM
New member here: Thank you so much for all this years-long analysis, this has been extremely interesting and enjoyable to read through. Now my turn: I had a realization last night that I haven't seen anyone else posit yet. For the verse:

"The Mississippi River, you know it's deep and wide
I can stand right here, see my face from the other side"

(for those who think it is face, as I do, rather than babe), I had been puzzling over how someone could see their own face from the other side of the river, and suddenly felt sure the line actually refers to looking down into the depth of the river and seeing one's own reflection.

Hi there. New member here, also, replying to this three years later  :o (Not even sure this thread is still going, but I did feel compelled to share a thought or two...)

I won't pretend to be any kind of expert on historical blues lyrics, and from what I've read there is probably a great chance the lyrics to some of these songs are sort of pieced together without perhaps any specific over-arching narrative in mind...

Still, I wondered if there is any one else out there who hears this entire song as a flat-out suicide note? I mean, there is the overall grimness in chords, the sadness of the singing voice and the title itself: not just refering to the last reported speech of her lover, but perhaps also her own "last kind words", explaining why she's about to do what she's going to do. In the song itself, the last (kind) words of anyone mentioned are always followed by their death, be it in the case of the "daddy" or, later on, the mother "just before she died". So, if these lyrics are also the singer's last kind words, that maybe means she is also about to die?

This is also why, in keeping with what heather said, I tend to think the Mississippi part is about looking into the river and seeing her own reflection - specifically, right before she is about to drown herself, to be with her dead lover "on the other side". The fact that she's not sure if she will see him after she's crossed that deep ocean is up for interpretation. Perhaps because she's not all that sure there even is an afterlife? Or because one of them might be in hell and the other in heaven?

In fact, I even hear the part where she goes to the train depot as an earlier failed suicide-attempt: she went there, crying, thinking about death and heaven while she's looking up at the stars (at least that's what I hear) and was about to throw herself in front of a train, but there wasn't any. As a result, she had to try something else, namely: walk all the way to the Mississippi river to drown herself. At least, that's how I intuitively linked up that sudden change of location in the song from the station in one line, to near the river in the next. 

I don't know. Maybe I'm just rambling on here without any sense of the song's history or context. But I did enjoy reading all of your interpretations and I really got into the lyrics of this fascinating song. So thanks for giving me an inspiring and profound thing to do for a couple of hours  ;)

Greetings from Belgium!


Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: Rivers on September 18, 2020, 07:38:24 PM
Hi PT,

Welcome to the weeniecampbell forum, where old threads never die, but if they do it's of natural causes.

Wow! I'd never thought about the narrative in that way. Looking back on it, ask anyone, I've come up with some fairly crazy theories of my own about this song.

You could be on to something, I will meditate some more on this. My first thought was that real poetry reveals multiple interpretations. Yours is pretty deep and makes a lot of sense, particularly the way the narrative, and Geeshie's delivery of it, fits so well with the guitar music.
Title: Re: Geeshie Wiley's Last Kind Words
Post by: btasoundsradio on May 10, 2023, 05:37:37 PM
Relistening, it's definitely babe.
I can't remember if I said this before, but upon learning that Geeshie and LV are from Texas, my mind immediately went to Blind Lemon's "War Time Blues" as a possible musical relative of "Last Kind Words". Similar lyrical theme (mention of war) and melody. His use of a pivoted A minor is very similar to Geeshie's guitar lick. These are the only 2 blues song that I know of that use an A minor in that way. They're both tuned a half step below concert in the E position, so same key. I also believe it's Geeshie's only song that uses that 1/2 step lower tuning. Maybe even Lemon was inspired by Geeshie?
correction: Over To My House is also the same key
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUzXQSmgZhA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAKfy2W70Qg
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