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I'm goin' down to the pawnshop, see if I can pawn my guitar - Blind Boy Fuller, Three Ball Blues

Author Topic: Big Joe Williams Lyrics  (Read 14713 times)

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Offline Johnm

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Re: Big Joe Williams Lyrics
« Reply #135 on: November 26, 2018, 06:42:03 AM »
Thanks very much for the help, Chris.  I re-listened and everything you suggested checked out in terms of sound and sense.  I have made the changes, thanks!  I will keep listening to that bent bracketed phrase and see if I can make any headway on it.
« Last Edit: November 26, 2018, 08:04:23 AM by Johnm »

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Re: Big Joe Williams Lyrics
« Reply #136 on: November 26, 2018, 05:35:37 PM »
I hear "if you care to go" for the bent bracketed phrase
« Last Edit: November 26, 2018, 05:37:01 PM by Rivers »

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Re: Big Joe Williams Lyrics
« Reply #137 on: November 27, 2018, 03:10:12 PM »
After re-listening many times, I agree with you, Rivers--thanks!  The sound is good, and the syntax is less awkward than it was with "we" in there.  I have made the change.
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